This is a poem about my heroine in my book-her name is Amethyst, and she is a vampire.
To save her world, she has to kill herself, killing with her the evil Pain, Misery, Deception, Envy and Despair.
This is about her journey to her death.
Silence.
Bordered by fear.
Pain closing in,
I'm fearing the worst.
Darkness blurs into grey
The stars i can't see shimmer
I close my eyes
And try to cry.
No tears come
I was made to fight
Made to take the Pain
Misery
Deception
Envy
and Despair
Life did not belong to me
It never will
Love will never triumph.
How can love exist,
In one who has never felt it?
I hope someone can save me.
Anyone.
But there is no-one there
To hold my cold hand
Death is standing,
Waiting,
With open arms.
Beckoning to me,
To walk to him.
Blue Eyed Death,
Forever chasing,
Never catching.
Till now.
Pain is fading...
Leaving you is pain enough
What do you think?
Please note:i am only a fourteen yr old girl.
XD
Revised poem...please edit?systemworks
i think that it is good but it needs tying together to be able to bring it from the beginning to the end. Try some repitition in words or phrases. but, it is a poem so it's supposed to be how you want it not someone else
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